Thursday, May 26, 2005,
(3rd rev., version 4, 160 wds.)

25 Iambs Cinq, Perhaps Trochees
poem: Copyright © 2005 by Dennis R. Mannisto
photo: Copyright © 2004 by Keith R. Mannisto - - - (photo shot ~1 pm, 16 Oct. 2004 along Lake Superior)
Movingness precedes, but wakens into,
Moving, moving. Moving moves a bit
Ahead or up or down or back around
To almost just the place where moving rose
From quiet movingness, unasked to rise,
Or maybe elsewhere, or around a point.
Describing, then, for you (because it takes
Less time and lazy me prefers the lesser
Work efficient language lets me use)
This moving, moving, moving, we agree
To call this iteration that appears
To us consistent to our eyes by name:
Movement. Movement then continues moving
Unaware of us or our agreement.
God was born, that day, all innocent
Of words of ours. Silence moving, resting,
Merely moving: movingness Becomes.
Such moving causes purpose in itself
Rather than a purpose prompting it.
Always never claiming names we give,
Moving gently passes names before we speak.
Our silence tries to keep up pace with this,
The free and moving movingness eluding
Every given name’s encumbrance. Move,
But always only after movingness.
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poem Copyright © 2005 by Dennis R. Mannisto
photo Copyright © 2004 by Keith R. Mannisto
(photo shot ~1 pm, 16 Oct. 2004 along Lake Superior)
My related pages include an essay, an academic-ish remark about movingness, math, and A.N. Whitehead, and an old, muddled ramble.